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Nova Cassé Orira Please critique my character! Thanks in advance!
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Love it! You go into so much detail with Nova I absolutely love her and want to know what she does in the story just from reading it. Wondering what she wears? Does she have fire-resistant clothing? What's her favorite color?
I also love how she changes in the story from being very prejudiced to wanting to protect her friends (so sweet!)
10 outta 10 if it's coming from me. You better tell me right away if/when you finish the story so that I can read it!!!
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Thank you so much Lydia! And thanks for the idea about the clothes. I haven't thought about them yet and that's probably quite important.