Draw/Critque?

Hi! If anyone could critique or draw my characters over time, I would really appreciate it. Thank you so much :))

Which ones? I'd be down to draw or critique a few of them!

You critiqued one of my characters yesterday and I tried to incorporate it into my character and I spent all day on it. If you could perhaps critique it again and if you have time, draw it, I would appreciate it so much :))

Sure! I'd be happy to!
I'll start by critiquing her first again and get around to drawing her later.
So i'm just going to skip right to her nature and go over that stuff quickly!

So you fixed her mannerisms and they seem pretty good! So nice job!
I think you should expand on her flaws a bit! She only has two or three listed. Flaws are one of the most important thing when creating a character! They make the character feel like a person instead of just a name. Maybe shes indecisive? Or maybe shes hypocritical? Just expand on her flaws a bit more!
Now for her favorites, why are they her favorites? Why does she love her grandmas brownies so much? And what's so special about pocket knives that make her like them so much?

Alright, so thats about as much I have to add since I last critiqued her!
I'll get to drawing her in just a bit!

Thanks so much! You're so nice and amazing with your critiques! :))

Of course!

And I got around to drawing her! Here she is!

THANK YOU SO MUCH SHE LOOKS AMAZING!!! OMG :)))))

no problem!! ^^

Aww hahah, thank you!

Hello! If someone could, I was wondering if they could draw this character? I'm also still working on her personality and stuff, so ignore that, haha.

Thanks so much :))