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@Keeja forum 5 comments schedule
@Keeja

Heyo! I've been working on my character Jackson and, I mean, I still have a pretty long way to go, but I'd like to hear some of your opinions: Ezekiel Jackson Smith

degdeg

Hello! He has a pretty solid backstory, but I think you should detail his personality a bit more. Putting down Myer-Briggs normally only comes after a thorough discussion of how they act.

@Joy_

Wassup! I really like Jackson, he seems really cool. I agree with degdeg, the personality is a bit lacking. Here are a few things that have helped me with character personalities.
*What makes him smile?
*What triggers bad memories?
*What drives him?
*Is he generally cheerful, or subdued?
*Does he hide his feelings or is he open with them?
*How does he act when he is angry?
*What is his fatal flaw?
*Does he have any guilt, deserved or not?
*What kind of music does he like?

Hope all this helps!

@Keeja

Thank you, Joy! And yes this does help.

@Mindful_Bison

As for the physical description, he is described as being very athletic (-looking at least). I would suggest either making him taller (to about 6'1 to be healthy) or make him lighter (to about 155 lb). I'm looking at a BMI chart, and it looks like Jackson is overweight.
These are just suggestions based on standard healthy proportions according to a BMI chart, so do what you want with this info