Guys i need some criticism here

Introducing my baby, Queirra.

Please keep in mind that i'm SUCK at english. Also i created her character based on 2 canon games of final fantasy (check it out they have some pretty awesome characters) so please take it to consideration if anything doesn't make sense. And also there's not much on her relationship aspect coz this is my very first character. Thank you in advance

And btw i would gladly answer if any of you have a question for her, or regarding her overall characterization. (And i do wish if somebody could draw her, please hit me up)

I think it's a really original character. The only problem with the character, I think, is that she doesn't have enough flaws. Maybe it's just me, but I think she's a little too effective at what she does, and is a little too overpowered. Sorry that I'm criticizing your character a lot, otherwise it's a really cool character!

I think it's a really original character. The only problem with the character, I think, is that she doesn't have enough flaws. Maybe it's just me, but I think she's a little too effective at what she does, and is a little too overpowered. Sorry that I'm criticizing your character a lot, otherwise it's a really cool character!

Thank you so much, i'll think about it

I think it's a really original character. The only problem with the character, I think, is that she doesn't have enough flaws. Maybe it's just me, but I think she's a little too effective at what she does, and is a little too overpowered. Sorry that I'm criticizing your character a lot, otherwise it's a really cool character!

Thank you so much, i'll think about it

By the way, I came up with this character and I'm not sure if they're too stereotypical, so could you give me some feedback?

I think it's a really original character. The only problem with the character, I think, is that she doesn't have enough flaws. Maybe it's just me, but I think she's a little too effective at what she does, and is a little too overpowered. Sorry that I'm criticizing your character a lot, otherwise it's a really cool character!

Thank you so much, i'll think about it

By the way, I came up with this character and I'm not sure if they're too stereotypical, so could you give me some feedback?

I've done it on your post