hi friends!! just so i don't get overwhelmed with the number of characters please only do 1. also, please send in some that have some categories filled out but not all of them!! im just recommending things so you do what you want! thats it:))
Aah, yay! Ok, do you wanna take a look at my boy, Dominik?
All the bg info you need to know about his story, is that it takes place 200 years into the future, and he's a 'supersoldier' (GEU) so he was basically made in a lab. Same process as cloning, except his DNA is unique. Also, slightly important detail, there's kinda been a "zombie apocalypse" going on for the past 38 years. Zombies are called hollows 👌
If you have any other questions, let me know! Thank you!
@Torpion Hi! Oh, my goodness your character is soo cool! I honestly don't have that many critiques! I liked how you added the attire category, I've never thought of that. The only critique I have is about his mask, and I just want to know more about it. Why does he feel more confident in the mask? Is it because no one knows who he is? I don't know but, overall I think that Dominik is a well thought out character! Sorry if that was kinda unhelpful haha. From what I've seen he looks super cool! also, thank you so much for letting me do that haha! much love:))
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Never submitted a character before but if you're okay reviewing someone who's somewhere between the first and second drafts of his final form, here's Dustin! Dustin Cole Just fyi: if you see someone named Brian, that's also Dustin; I changed his name recently and might have missed a Brian or two.
Hope you enjoy reading what I've got about him so far! Apologies if things don't make sense because of the worldbuilding I've alluded to that was done outside his page, I'm not the best at organizing (also down for suggestions on improving that.) Thanks!
here's Alice. I've spent quite some time on her so please don't hold back, tear her apart.
Oh! Could you please review Jesse? Jesse David Reeves
So. Valentina is a big cringe fest and i want to know some ideas on how to make her…less so. More original.
ok so I've had her in my head for a while but I really need help fleshing her out, so anyone on here, just go for it. Saoirse Druimeineach
Here's my character if you're interested… Alec Ian Zephyr
If this is okay?
Have at it
This is Calandra, she's one of 4 main characters in my book
