(I'm not very good at critiques so, sorry)
I'll critique your character(s) if you want!
You can critique my girl Ellen if you want!
Okay, how do I get there?
I'll just post a link to her bio page. Hold on a sec.
(NOTE: I swear she has more friends then just her family, I just haven't developed them quite yet)
@That_One_Lavender_Owl_that's_into_Sci-Fi
Okay, so I think that this is a really good character so far. I'm a little bit confused on what you mean by anti-hero so maybe you could elaborate on that. I also like all the detail in her personality type, she seems really interesting and I think that she is developed really well. Maybe you could also elaborate on her skin tone a little bit. All in all this is a great character, I would love to read the story.
Thanks!
The dictionary definition of anti-hero is 'A central character in a story, movie, or drama who lacks conventional heroic attributes'.
The plot I have her in is still being refined, so she might handle some things in an anti-hero way.
Could you critique my character Rie? Here's the link; Rie Katayama
barabara
First of all, I like the name Rie. It's an unusual name, but it totally fits her character. Also, I think it is cool how you totally have everything super detailed. I think the metaphor "island of ice with a volcano in center" is a really good way of putting her personality. This sounds like an interesting and amazing story, and I would read the heck out of it.
Could you look at my character? Her name is Míla, and FYI, the seed language of her home country is Russian
Hi I was wondering If you could look at my main character Amber and give some feedback. Only if you have time. Thanks,
Ellen
It's says I don't have permission to view your character, so do you think you could fix it?
Queen
I can't view yours either.
I fixed it, thanks for letting me know
Ellen
So I think that she has a really cool name, first of all. I also think that you could add a bit more to mannerisms and personality type, and maybe add a bit to backstory if you can. I also would like to find out how she got her name. I think that she is a really cool character.
Would you mind critiquing my boy when you have the time? Here he is :) Invalid Character
