I'm in an editing mood. Anyone want some feedback?

I'm fairly new to this website, so if you share an excerpt I might take a little bit to find it.

Can you help me?

oof i vanished off the face of the earth. Sure! if you still need help lemme know and i'll give you my email.

Yes I still need help thanks so much.

And it's we've all got lives right?

*it's cool

I'm new here too