I want a new perspective on my story, so help me out

The lights go out and the windows shatter, the only light left is the flickering fire of the candles on my 13th birthday cake. No one screams. Everyone is calm and the eery silence rings through the autumn night. Happy Birthday, dear Oak, Happy Birthday to you.

a horror story? it seems interesting since there's something going on but it's not entirely certain what.

Well, it is a bit of every genre, horror, thriller, romance, comedy. Its very diverse.