I will critique charachters!

Hello! I am here to give some advice about charachters. Please give info about charachters and i will critique.

Can you do these two?

Thanks in adavnce!

My boy Danny: Daniel Fletcher
Feel free to put your thoughts & inputs on him, I'd love to hear them!! :D

Heyo.
This is my bean Lucas!

Thanks!

All I can say is he needs help