I need an out side sources opinion! :)))
Cyrus
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Let's talk CHARACTER!
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if you make the page public, i’d be happy to have a look at it!!
Yes! Thank you for letting me know that my character wasn't accessible! I'm new :)))
Looks good, but I would add more info like flaws, motivations, and maybe a background about the “casting” and “calls him a weapon” part
Thank you for the feed back! :)
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yeah i second everything zandra mentioned, but he seems interesting
Anyone want to critique my character?