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Letters Across the Universe (Always open. Say you read page one stuff)

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So. Idea. In some manner or another (which will not be commented on or explained) letters are able to be sent from any character to another. Pen pal deals can be made. Anything can be spoken about within reason, except arguing about deities.

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You also must have my permission to join and have a somewhat developed universe.

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(Bump.)

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Ooh ok! I’m intrigued by this. May I have your permission to join?

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Oh yay a person! Well, do you have a developed world?

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I have one futuristic sci-fi universe that I’d say is pretty well developed. I’ve got a few planets, space stations, and whatnot. The characters in this universe are my most complete out of my stories because they’ve had a few years in my head to mature

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Then yes you may enter!

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Great!

book

You can either tell me a little about your character or go in all blind. But whatever the case, go ahead and start writing a personal open letter about your universe. (Like the first time to a pen pal or something.) Remember that this is an exercise in working with character voice so make sure the personality is there in the writing.

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I think I’d prefer to go in blind because that seems like it’ll be quite fun! I will start work on her letter now :)

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Cool! I'll think about a character to respond.

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Oh, would you like me to submit the letter as a post in the chat, make it a public document, or share it as a Google Doc?

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Oh just post it here. It can be long, but it doesn't have to be. Just long enough to be a letter.

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Alright! I’m gonna make a few more edits and then I’ll post it! Please, give me any critiques you have!

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Mistakes are also quite alright if they are in character as long as they don't make it impossible to read.

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May I join? I have a world, it's not all written out but It's there.

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Here you go! Hopefully this isn't too short, I just wanted to provide a bit of background without writing a page of exposition. :)

Hello there, New Pen Pal!

My name is Artimae Moongazer and I am quite ecstatic to be writing this letter! Currently, I have a single friend outside of Vera City, so this is a great opportunity to expand my knowledge of the universe. After all, increasing my sample size of data about the universe can only be beneficial, and because I do not know very much about you at the moment, this is a fantastic vessel for exploration!

Oh, could you give me a second? My parents want to talk to me. Recording, pause.

Elias and Valerie have just informed me that before I am allowed to ask you any questions, I have to write about myself. Blast it! Well, my name is Artimae, I am 14 galactic standard years old, and I’m pursuing botany aboard the scientific research station Vera City. We have a population of 17 scientists, including myself, and the last time any one of us left the station was 15 years ago, when the Vera City Project was founded. I enjoy reading, performing botanical experiments, and holochatting with my best friend, Kaz Regor. Is that enough?

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Fine! Fine. Ok, um, I’m about 70% human and 30%… not. You see, in our region of the universe, humankind arrived about 600 years ago after they fled their dying planet. An accidental wormhole leap brought them in contact with the rest of the established universe, who had previously considered humans to be too primitive to initiate contact. Surprisingly for many species, humans slipped right into the universal order, dispersing across the settled systems. The accelerated reproductive rate of humans and their flexible and adaptive… systems allowed them to integrate their species with many others, and today, most beings are at least some percentage of human. History isn’t really my strong suit, but I do know the basics! I like more scientific pursuits, personally, but each to their own, I suppose.

Great, so I get to ask my questions now! What is your location classified as? Is it a moon, a planet, or an artificial satellite? Have you ever completed a wormhole jump and can you describe the experience? What is the native flora like where you live and is it sentient? Do you orbit a star and could you identify what class it is? Could you-

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Whoops! I have to check on one of my experiments, and if I don’t my lab will most likely become covered in fertilizer, so I have to go. Goodbye for now, New Pen Pal!

End recording.

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@Fangirl616 group

(Hey, I know you already have a pending request, but could my character join? The world is pretty fleshed out, mostly because there's only a few key differences that separate it from our own. Feel free to tell me to go screw off and do something else.)

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Translated from High Menna

Greetings Artimae. My name is Alék.
I am an apprentice in the Kaspit Dodaskux, {translation: House of Teaching} learning to use my dexár, which is Darkness. You don't know about dexír, so I must tell you. All have a dexár. Some are greater than others. Of the Menna tribe, my people, some of the great dexír are ways to manipulate the strengths of the world. The Megnas Dodaskos {translation: Great Teacher} of the House is Lord Sorás. He is greatly hailed for his defeat of the Traprodos, Morlus. I myself reverence him much. He has two dexír. One is the dexár of light, the other is the dexár of heat. This is unusual, but not impossible. Some say that he is a descendant of Zol and Gaudári the great.
I am wondrous at the many things you speak of.
I am also fourteen years of age! I greatly enjoy reading as well. Do you have a favorite of the Histories of your people? I wonder at you having one friend. Why is that? Are you lonely? Or do you prefer to be alone? You speak of numbers of Human you are. Is your mother or father from another tribe? Lord Sorás and his sister both married outside of the tribe. The Menna do not think it an evil thing. But many of the AlFen disagree on this. But the ones that Sorás and Arrena married were already half Menna.
I do not understand much of what you speak, (What is science? Is it like healing or gardening?) but I shall try to answer your questions. We live on the island Althálos where we were driven long long ago. We have many worms if we dig for them. I used to do it all the time as a child. And there are many trees and plants and it rains often; especially around the base of the mountain I live on. We have many stars that are beautiful at night. And Soliosi and always comes to us every morning while Seluno comes every night.
I think I understand something now. Do not think me a fool if I am wrong. Did you leave your planet? How?

book

(Yeah you can join. Just follow everything I set up.)

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@Fangirl616 group

(I'm assuming I start with my own letter?)

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(Yeah.)

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( Salutations! I'd like to ask for permission to enter. My Universe is quite intensely developed, and its Counter-Universe is the same way. Both still gain details to this day. The Universe itself is a version of the Earth that I created, an alternate universe of reality, I guess. Its counter is basically the 'Hell' in their world, though you can access it without having to be dead. Feel free to ask questions, or reject! )

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@Fangirl616 group

(Alright, here goes)

Dear New Pen Pal,

Is this how you start a letter? I have no idea how to start a letter. I only recently learned how to read and write, despite being seventeen. But I guess I should explain a little bit about who I am. My designation is Theta, but my name is Zenith. Call me Theta and no multiversal boundary will stop me from killing you. But that’s beside the point. Anyway, back to who I am. Zenith Zagami, the one and only artificial human. Just… don’t ask. Since I doubt the feds can monitor these, I might as well mention that I’m a merc. Not really by choice, more like I was literally created to kill and don’t really know how to do anything else. Yeah, you read all of that right, I’m an artificial human designed to kill people. But I don’t really like killing. Cooking is much more enjoyable. But a lot of times, I don’t really get a say in the matter. I mean, the government’s still after me, so a guy’s gotta do what a guy’s gotta do. Oh, I should probably mention that I have a healing factor that makes my pretty much immortal.

But that’s probably more than you wanted to know. I understand if you don’t want to be my pen pal. I’m kinda a lot to handle. That’s probably why I only have a few friends. If for some obscene reason you still want to chat with me, well, I guess it’s my turn to ask some questions. What’s your name? Do you have any powers? Do you have an arch-enemy? What’s your favorite kind of weapon?

Respectfully, Zenith.

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(You're in, Sorrel. Reply to Fangirl for now.)

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Hello Alék!

You’re 14 too! That’s great! History is not my favorite subject, but I like reading about the origins of different species in our galaxy. I am very glad I received a reply from you! I appreciate that you are concerned about me only having one friend, but it is completely alright. Aboard Vera City, I am the only kid, and while I consider myself to be very close to the other scientists, it’s more like having a dozen parents than having friends. My one friend lives in a hotel halfway across the galaxy, so we communicate through our holopads. To answer the question about my humanity, we don’t have tribes here exactly. We have species and and different sub-species. Both my mother and father are mostly human, but have “alien” ancestors somewhere in their family trees. And science! You don’t have science on your planet?! HOW?!

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Sorry! Anyway, you’re really missing out! Science is basically the pursuit of understanding and figuring out how the world around us works. It sounds sort of like your ‘dexár’ is science too, but your people just don’t call it that. Is dexár a weapon or physical skill your people have? I’m afraid I don’t really get what it is.

Wait a second, your people have never left their planet? Do you not have technology advanced enough to leave your planet’s orbit? We have spaceships, which are like ships, but you know, in space, and we use wormholes, big metal circles that surround rips in space-time, to travel faster than the speed of light. How advanced is the technology on your planet? Do you have any sort of instant communication devices or artificial lighting? Please, tell me all that you can!

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Translated from high Menna

Hey Artimae!
Why do you not like Histories? How else do you learn the stories of your people? It sounds like different species are like the tribes; Because the tribes were once all the same family, but then they formed the tribes. The tribes were also changed to be different. The Dweorv tribe is small and strong, and the AlFen tribe is tall and darkest.
Is a holopad something to write letters on?
So scientists are like teachers that search for knowledge? You must be very wise to work among them.
A great dexár can be used as a weapon; but they should be used as tools. Zol taught us that way. He had the great dexár, which was light, which pairs with the greatest dexár, which is life. Zol had the power to heal or to kill as he wished. But he refused to fight unless it was to protect his life or other. He taught us to do the same. Our dexár is like an orb of power within us. We can used that power to use the great forces of the world. The lesser dexír are in all people. They can be mercy or wisdom or skill with a sword.
I do not know what orbit is. But we stay on the ground. You have ships that go into the heaven that go fast? Why would worms have metal holes in the heaven? It sounds like our worms are much smaller creatures.
We have many tools. Things for melting metal to make things with. We have no tools for talking with. Why would you need that? Are there many mute? I don't know what artificial means, but we have the light of Solíos and Selún and the many stars.

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im still wondering if My god-o can join…

book

(Yeah sure. You'll need to find a pen pal though. (Multiple pen pals are allowed and if you do that, then multiple characters) I'm just going to stay one on one atm. Remember that you must have a developed world and preferable a decent handle on how your character speaks.)

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(Oh and the rule of parentheses applies here too.)