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Do what you will. Critique i guess, just know this is something I wrote in an hour and I don't intend to re-visit it. ever.
aces, i suppose..
https://www.notebook.ai/documents/130038
[ps, cw fer gore n stuff]
That was definitely spooky
Discomforting
but in an interesting way
Interesting premise (like was this an extraterrestrial it supernatural being bound to human form, or a human with major depersonalization) and you have an instinct for when to mention details and when to keep vague.
Could use a dash more plot development in my opinion, but, as you wrote something and your handle is currently Writers GD Block, then I say take the win. You wrote a thing! Hurrah for thing!
