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WC: 3345
Warning: There is a whole load of backstory in this chapter but it is necessary to understand the rest of the novel and I didn't want to write it as a prologue.
Thanks :)
https://www.evernote.com/shard/s482/sh/af99ac7b-b544-4af4-ad6e-c15f4d4c9748/2fd6bfa3f1052a274af579a334ccce94
UHM??? THAT WAS REALLY GOOD?? PLEASE WRITE THE REST???
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Ahh thank you so much! I tried to get my mum to critique but she isn't exactly the best when it comes to constructive criticism.
I think the descriptions are really good and the idea is Definitely super intriguing !
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What did you think of the tone? I was going for a bed time story patronising feel.
I liked the tone, it seemed to fit the character really well! Lizzie seems a little cynical (when it comes to Waite, at least)
What sort of critiques/criticisms are you looking for?
My wig flew. It was so good! The descriptions were well managed and so was the world building. Excellent job!
I want to read it but the link won't work D:
Edit: never mind, I found a working link on the post for your second chapter :)
