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Reviewing and Critiquing Characters

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I'll try to give an honest opinion on them, no shit like "oh I think this character is great!" is gonna be said. So send in your characters!

@KingWafflzilla

Darrian Scrax Lanchaster Hope he's any good! I would expand way more but I don't have the premium service.

@WriteOutofTime

heyooo here's my newest girl

redplanet

Heyy
I need constructive criticism so thank you. This is my protag, Parker.
Invalid Character Thx!!

@Kinarymo

Hey q3q
mind taking a look at my villain? Tell me what you think

thx <3

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@tazu group

Hey q3q
mind taking a look at my villain? Tell me what you think

thx <3

This sounds like a pretty decent villain character. Their background is okay, revenge is a thing for a main antagonist, and the design looks a little bit intimidating. The character is okay and well thought out.
7.5/10

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@tazu group

Heyy
I need constructive criticism so thank you. This is my protag, Parker.
Invalid Character Thx!!

She reminds me a bit of a friendly doormat. Sure, she can care about her friends and family, but what about herself?
She's kind of a shoujo protag (goes to high school, cares a LOT about her friends and very polite).
The design is okay (though I would like to see it illustrated instead of getting a random pic of a girl on the internet), and the personality is kind of okay (??)
7.4/10