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Some feedback please on this character I'm working on

@Oniyuri forum 3 comments schedule
@Oniyuri

Hello all! I'm recently working on this character so I can implement her into a story I am planning out. So far she's not 100% complete yet as there are stuff she's missing but so far I want to know if she's good so far or do I need to iron out a few details, etc.

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Looks good so far :) Only critique is that at 5'4", 115 lbs is tiny. If she enjoys dancing, and also likes a lot of sweets and unhealthy foods, those are things that would bring her weight up, either from muscle or fat. Just a thought.

@FallenSinAza

I agree, my stats are similar and I'm straight up small. Bringing her weight up by even 5 pounds will make her seem healthier