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Suggestions are appreciated!

@Raziel Gallephraya forum 2 comments schedule
@Raziel Gallephraya

I know I posted this in sharing and critiques too, but I know people are on here more often! Here's the character: Nova Jones (OLD)
If you have any suggestions or critiques they would be appreciated!

Carolin

Nova is really interesting character and I enjoyed to read her describtion.
Although I didn't quite understand why her favourite animal is a crow, because she is such a developed character who searches for happiness and crows have something dark and scary… but that's just a small thing.
I also think her habit to make excessive noises fits perfectly to her and her background, so I would definitely keep that.
So all in all Nova is a really cool character and I would love to read more about her :)