Thoughts on a "Who Killed Markiplier?" story?

The story is based off the YouTube series "Who Killed Markipler?" and its basically the same thing as the video. Thoughts?

I know you posted this a while ago, but I read "markiplier" and clicked lol I would be interested if you change up the characters a bit, create relationships and trust between certain characters and then break it later, kinda like what happened between the Mayor and Colonel. If you're interested, go for it!

haha and thanks! That's for sure what I was going to do, I'm adding more chemistry between characters and more backstory and whatnot. Thanks for your feedback!!!

Me: hears "Who Killed Markiplier"
Me: screams and dies and cries because my babies, quite literally, got fucking brutally murdered
Also me: Hears "Who Killed Markiplier" and can only picture the detective sniffing his fingers and Mark's underwear.

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Sorry sis, had to jump in here. there's only one Markiplier thing on here and I need to take advantage of it.

lol don't apologize sis you're good

lol thank