would someone be willing to review my short story and fix it and maybe add stuff to it to make it better?

I need help

What’s your level of writing? I’m okay, so I might be some help, I could help with spelling, punctuation, dialogue, capitalization and that’s about it, I can also tell if it’s rushed.

I might be able to help a little, I may not be a master but I’m not a complete noob

I can help with advanced grammar checks.

I can do it for sure.

HIYA i can help if you still need it