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(Does this count as fluff...?) Dmitri runs a lot faster than you’re meant to, or maybe I’m just not used to running, but either way, I’m out of breath by the time we duck into a dark alleyway. It ...

Okay so I've not done a character like this before so if someone could help me out I'd really appreciate it! :) https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/406225

I'm trying to make them as real as possible so https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/244675 https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/247657

I really appreciate opinions and advice from others, so if y'all could take a look, that'd be great. Thanks! :) https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/244675 EDIT: I actually do read yall's...

If anyone could please tell me if this world makes any sense or needs any work I'd greatly appreciate it. Thanks! :) https://www.notebook.ai/plan/locations/64634

Oh, sorry! I thought I had made it public. I forgot, but I changed it so it should work now

Sorry, I didn't check it. Does this one work?? Sorry... https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/247657

I know I've spent a lot of time on this character, but I'd like a second set of eyes because I know if my character isn't written well then my full writing won't be understandable. So if y'all coul...