Angel

In need of some criticism for a few characters, starting with this girl. https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/335152

https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/335152 thankyou!

@ruby jane What does she do when nervous? Angry? Expand on talents. Can she paint? Cook? Add more detail to her personality. Instead of ‘none’ I would deem her an Atheist. Hot pink? Neon pin...

@Celestial-B Payton: I would maybe add another talent? Is he a good write? Painter? Cook? What are his hobbies when he’s at home? What is he studying? Specific breed of bird? Really good! ...

@Robin_Jones What shade of red/ginger? Auburn? Fiery red? What shade of blue? Expand on hairstyle. Messy? Straight? Frizzy? How pale? Dense freckles? Sparse freckles?
Add more mannerisms. Wha...

@Robin_Jones I don't have permission to view your character :)

@Saph Sparrow I don't have permission to view your character.

@Lazarus Rusty what? Is her hair messy? Frizzy? How long is it? What shade of purple? How do the purple and black go together? Expand on ‘pudgy’ How big is the scar? Add more mannerisms. Wha...

@Flowerfur Deep violet? Pale violet? What kind of blonde? Platinum blonde? Ashy blonde? Any texture to her hair? Sleek? Frizzy? What shape of stripe? Where? I would add more mannerisms. What d...

@pastelpearls Dense freckles? Sparse freckles? What does he draw? Does he sing his own songs? Why doesn’t he care about religion or politics? What does he study as school? Which subjects are h...