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Oh, that is such a cool answer.....I love that example you gave with the 1950s America! Thank you so much, I'll take your advice and try not to overthink it. <3

If they've got a human vessel, that in itself can be a hard limit! There's only so much a humanoid body can take. Especially so if they value this body out of sentiment and want to preserve it. Thi...

My fantasy story is also gaslamp, which unfortunately complicates matters, since I AM thinking about a specific time period for my story to take place in (it's the 1900-1910 era). I just don't want...

Alright!! Looked through Ruka because I'm avoiding studying for finals lmao. Can I just say that his appearance looks absolutely precious??? His face seems so soft!! Also I read his hobbies sec...

My first 'real' OC was this girl named Reimei Suzumiya and she was a Gothic romance vampire thingy. Oh my god. She wasn't all that bad, like, she wasn't story-breaking overpowered or anything, but ...

(("*X-files music intensifies*" HAHAHHAHAHA)) If you'd like to pinpoint a plot, maybe you can start with the setting! When you envision these three characters, do you think of them in a particular...

Hello! He has a pretty solid backstory, but I think you should detail his personality a bit more. Putting down Myer-Briggs normally only comes after a thorough discussion of how they act.

@Snowmirror - About being calculating and reckless, I do like to think that it's mostly because she's been in so many problems that she ends up having to hone a particular skill at solving them. ...

That's some pretty cool advice! It makes me feel a bit better about the story, since I really do care about the plot and the characters. I'll keep it in mind as I write. Thanks so much!

Hey! Thanks for acknowledging my critique. You really did clear up some stuff, so that's good! If you'd like, you can give my girl a try? https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/382189 My pro...