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Pet peeve: Paranormal fiction where the paranormal's paranormal-ness is an anthropomorphized Other inside of them. Where the shifter or werewolf is just an actual human with an actual wolf insi...

When considered that way, her reactions _do_ make a lot more sense. The only issue is finding a way to get that across so the reader isn't yanked out of their suspension of disbelief by the kind-of...

That makes _so much more_ sense! Also, the frog thing got explained later, so I wasn't suggesting at any point changing that. Just that it definitely got my attention when it first happened. (It's ...

> She went over to her seat by the window and opened it for a bit of fresh air, heading out for a snack. There shouldn't be a comma connecting those two clauses, because it makes it seem like...

This is a bit from my paranormal romance WIP. I'm trying to keep the shifters from being overpowered by putting limits and consequences on their powers. ________ Leo gave serious considerat...

>hey, this prologue takes place before the rest of the book. The book is written about 2 years after this event and her parents are already deceased. This 'chapter' is an insight to the characte...

_________ "It's Tavashi! Ta-va-shi! Kikara Tavashi!" Kika enunciated. Damios rolled over with a huff. "Why does bother you so much?" "It bothers me because it's _wrong._ You keep sayin...

CW: Language, talk\implications of past abuse. ______ "Pets aren't humans." "You're right about that," Leo admitted. "Pets are a hell of a lot better and frankly I find it insulting that y...

(Kyrian here doesn't mention it because she is 1)Making a point, 2) talking from the second side of the conversation and 3) talking with friends who get her, So I'll say it for her: I acknowledge ...

(Character is named Valkyrian Knight.) ______ "I /hate\ being called Val, and without fail, everyone I tell my full name to _fucking calls me Val._" A momentary pause. "Except for goddamn M...