Wren

Supernatural is great, unless you are bothered by a high level of violence and/or gore

Sounds great! My only advice is that, assuming the wall they punch through is drywall, the wall wouldn't shatter into pieces small enough to get stuck in a cut on their fist. Drywall breaks pretty ...

no problem :)

for one thing, that sounds like a brilliant story. second, you could try a notable childhood memory concerning the brothers, one that really affects their daily life. if that doesn't work, you coul...

were the characters childhood friends? you could always include a flashback

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sorry if I sound nosy, its just that background could help with ideas for your writers block.

what sort of story is it?

A thief could break into the house, the parents come to see what the noise is, the thief shoots them (because no witnesses if you kill them all, right?). There you go, two dead parents, and one Bat...

Try putting the life of one of the said characters companions, that you want to work on their relationship with, at risk. I find this moves along their relationship and the story.