Alexis

no problemo, and honestly, I'm not terribly experienced myself. I'm nineteen as well, but I went to university at 17 for an English degree. I think your work can really go somewhere if you write al...

I wrote this a hell of a long time ago as an intro to one of my scenes. Might as well post it because I most likely won't use it His voice echoed throughout the large space, loud words, shouted...

I have a suggestion, that chuck of text that the captor says is incredibly hard to read. It's way too long winded and needs to be broken up into sections, with action in the middle. Also, it's a ho...

it seems very rushed and impersonal. You shoved about three chapters worth of info, into a incredibly rushed scene. I would suggest creating a more introspective character, or even changing your PO...

That was extraordinarily helpful, honestly. I never thought of mapping out my book like it was a film, I've always sort of just planned it by scene. Also! The advice on syntax was very helpful as w...

Hey, I just quickly read through everything, and looked at your wattpad book. I also write on wattpad, though my story is considerably different. I have a few pointers for you. I've been writing fo...

The ground of the dilapidated city was covered in a thick layer of dust, it's surface nearly buried in the settled ash. The blacked grass on the side of the street was undisturbed as the falling pi...

So, I'm not gonna copy and past my work into the forum (lolz). But I have a few questions, I have trouble organizing my ideas and plot points into a story that's paced well. I don't struggle terrib...

Awhh thanks!

It happened when I was young, I was only five years old, the prime of my youth. It was a day I couldn't remember, but one I would never forget. There were three puddles that day, and compared to my...