Syifa

queirra actually still enjoys sleeping with her parents

Games, but almost all of my character's name was found when i'm daydreaming in the shower lmao

> @Syfia I'm quite fond of Final Fantasy as a franchise (even if I only like a handful of those games) so this'll be a fun critique! And don't worry about the English thing ^.^ > **Queirra L...

THANK GOODNESS I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS POST. Ok ok, so can you criticize my baby? https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/788761 But please keep in mind that i'm not good at english so excuse ...

But honestly the thing that makes a death sadder is the reaction of their loved ones. And our attachment to that character. That's why it broke my heart to kill my baby coz i've grown a lot to her

> > > I think it's a really original character. The only problem with the character, I think, is that she doesn't have enough flaws. Maybe it's just me, but I think she's a little too effe...

I dont have a lot to say, but i think you need to express more. Use more description, so it'll be easier for people to visualize the character. Overall it's a great character. Keep up the good work :)

> I think it's a really original character. The only problem with the character, I think, is that she doesn't have enough flaws. Maybe it's just me, but I think she's a little too effective at w...

Introducing my baby, Queirra. https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/788761#overview_panel Please keep in mind that i'm SUCK at english. Also i created her character based on 2 canon games of f...

> In one of my stories, two of the six main characters die and I really hate myself for it. They're two of my absolute favourites but it's really necessary for completing character arcs and prog...