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Hi! I'm bad at starting intros so I'm just going to head right on in. - First thing I'm seeing is that she's kinda overweight? I mean, there's no problem with that, I'm just noticing that you neve...

Oh, sorry. Well I mean, you can leave it as Christianity, I was just curious whether they were, like, Presbyterian or Methodist or Lutheran. Like in this chart, there are a bunch of branches of th...

It's all good. Just say what she believes in then. Like my friend believes that there are truly three persons in one God or if she just thinks there's a God with a big ol plan.

Hi! (Yo, I'm so sorry if that's coming on too strong, I just don't know how to start conversations so I'll just start. I'm sorry if I seem rude.) -For mannerisms, it's a bit vague, so if you wanna...

So for Jemma, a bit of the same things. -Who calls her Jem? -For her motivations, what about those people? Does she loathe them (I know she's Isa's best friend but it's an example) and she's a he...

This'll be my first critique, so sorry if it isn't the best! So she seems like a really solid character and I quite enjoy her. -Who calls her Sunshine? All of her friends? Just her best friend? ...

Oh man, I planned on responding earlier, but my computer crashed. It's never too late! I'll just respond by corresponding bullet points. -It was intentional because I didn't know exactly how to ph...

I've been working on making her really well and I wanted to know how to make her better. All feedback is appreciated! https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/117486

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> I agree with both comments. Ophelia is suuuuuuuper awesome! I would love to see her background story or anything about why she doesnt like boys/mans/teenagers. But like I already said: I WANT ...