Lauren

@CinnamonRoll as always, the advice you give is amazing and thorough. it really shows how much you care. this has been a great journey, and thanks to you i think my characters have really developed...

@ccb37 oh my GOD!!!!! this is absolutely amazing!!! you got it spot on!!!!!!! thank you thank you thank you thank you!!!! this is absolutely gorgeous!!!!! it means so much!!!

https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/952907 would you mind doing mine perhaps? if it isn't any trouble. he's a winged character that has an occupation as a reporter. he's very flamboyant and wea...

@CinnamonRoll okay, let me just say... thank you... for everything. your speed when answering your critique requests and how thoroughly you read the characters, its all so amazing. I truly believe ...

@dropsofjupiterin_herhair this is a cool idea, and i think this concept can really be built off into something cool

@CinnamonRoll impulse purchase or not, you wont regret it!! :)

@stolenbrocoli also, one more thing :) yes, for now, I just inserted him into the storyline. and I totally understand the limitations of that, but I'm currently waiting to receive the comic books s...

@CinnamonRoll As always, thank you!!!! you once again have given me a lot to adjust which I greatly appreciate!!! i understand the confusion, the character went through many passes, and I guess the...

@stolenbrocoli its not harsh at all!!! i totally see what you mean and where you're coming from. i have a lot to work on, I greatly appreciate it!!

@stolenbrocoli thank you thank you thank you!!!! this is exactly what I needed and definitely one of the most helpful critiques I have gotten. this means so much and you gave me a LOT to think on. ...