CyanPluto

So the generation alive still remembers life before the apocalypse? One way to have it feel less hopeless might be to have small goals that the characters are aiming for that make them happy. A cha...

You could make it so the audience cheers for the little victories she accomplishes. Maybe (for example) she's afraid to leave the house or is too timid to talk to a man at the store, and we see her...

Not so much in writing, but on tv, villains who treat their henchmen as expendable or who have an incompetent mass army. Even if a villain is supposedly selfish, they would care that their workforc...

> My MC catches someone trying to steal from him. > MC: Aren't you forgetting something? > Thief: What? > MC: Stealth. That is a stellar line, Ari W., it made me laugh

@Emmapen What kind of music does Darina like to sing to?

Velorum is the kind of person who looks scary but is actually a big sweetie who believes in the best in people. She is a child who is unnerving and almost demonic to look at, but is full of determi...

I like it a lot, I think it's a good concept. The character would have to be highly intelligent to pull that off. I think it's something that is best when the audience knows about it, like they're ...

Zed and Kori: "Can you stop? That's really effed up" Adelaide, Elizabeth, and Ashley: "Make up your mind woman!" Rika: "So I noticed a flaw on page 12, and I think it would actually make more...

When a character learns something new, like the first time they try ice skating, or when they find out the answer to a secret they've been searching for

Is there anyone you have a crush on, Eos?