Louis

Thank you

@CinnamonRoll, I put their backstories in the notes if you go back to read them, just so you know where to find them.

Thank you so much. they are new, but thank you for being honest because I really want these characters to be as good as possible and the only way that happens is through real critique. I'm going to...

Looks like a cinnamon roll but could actually kill you: Dustin Looks like they could kill you but is actually a cinnamon roll: Jaegar Looks like a cinnamon roll and is actually a cinnamon roll: L...

Well, you should always provide indepth backstory. After that, determine some traits because of that. If you think you need to know more, than give her every little detail you can. It helps to dete...

Basically, 4 teenagers are the newest embodiment of the four horsemen of the apocalypse. They aren't the first horsemen, but they ARE the first to cause an apocalypse. That's because they all are n...

Go really deep. You have to know everything about your character; even more than you know about yourself. From their worst fears to the weirdest quirk to specific memories. You need to know it all....

When writing an alcoholic, there are two situations: a) They are always drunk b) They eventually become alcoholic In the case of a, make them feel unnatural. The character has to be unreliable, ...

Lane Roch, businesswoman and murderer. She is sacrificing people for occult purposes. The kids find her killing a nice store owner one day which sparks the whole thing. Her daughter was once with h...