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(posted this in General Writing, but I'm posting it here too) So I'm writing a found family story (comic format) about a young man named Adrien, who is the caretaker of a cemetery and landlord o...

So I'm writing a found family story (comic format) about a young man named Adrien, who is the caretaker of a cemetery and landlord of the ghosts who reside on the property. I'm calling it Lavender ...

@feelingbratty Hi! Thanks so much for your feedback- I'm so happy to know that you like my story!! I've got plans for how the watch is going to be used in the story, and (no spoilers, but) I'm p...

https://www.notebook.ai/plan/items/81524#

I've been working on this story for a while now (https://www.notebook.ai/plan/universes/233314), and the basic gist of it is that a time traveler from the 30s jumps ahead to the year 2032, meets up...

@Celestial-Burst Thank you so much for your feedback! * *facepalms* * I can't believe I forgot to describe his personality in his bio... I've updated it, though, if you're interested! Thanks for yo...

Could you critique my protag? (in particular his backstory/motivations) https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/897451#

I'm writing an urban science-fantasy webcomic (that's a mouthful...) that I have no idea what to name. This is the premise: *** In 1869, an epidemic of paranormal infections is spreading across...

This is my main protagonist, Mara. Feel free to rip her apart if you want (I'm trying to think of ways to improve her). https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/616140

@LonelyPotato Thank you so much for the critique!! To answer a few of your questions: > not sure how a face can be 'forgettable'. she has to have something that makes her recognizable. ...