Fort Walmart

Ari looks over the eerily quiet street.
"Do you think everyone else knows?" She asks, wiping her face with her sleeve again.

Kayla put her pocket knife away. “I explained it back at the school… so since we’re already here, let’s go inside!”
Kayla takes out a baseball bat and breaks a window. She throws Ari inside saying Sorry, then entering. She takes a hammer, wooden boards, and nails from a shelf, then blocks all the windows except for one. She placed a cup of vinegar beside it. I didn’t like to go after me… and I smell like vinegar… so will this work? She looked around the Walmart, it was empty of people and Zombies except for her and Ari. Kayla took Aris hand and went into the camera room. “Okay! So here we will make sure are friends get here and no Zombies… you will call on the intercom when you see a Zombie coming, and use the code word Zombie. Then if it’s a friend just say Cherry or Someone else made it here and aren’t a Zombie. I have no real good ideas…”

Ari nods.
"Mhn, ok. I think I got it. I saw this on a movie my boyfriend made watch once."
She sits in the spinning chair and bites her lip.
I hope the zombies haven't seen that movie…

(I started laughing when I saw the last line, am I okay?)
Kayla grabbed a baseball bat and left the room. She found a metal baseball bat and took it. She went over to the window and waited for the call, she was ready to smack up a bitch.

Val had silently followed the others to Walmart. She now stood next to Cherry and Edmund. ”I’ll check out the food and figure out what's perishable and stuff, ” Val said trying her best to be useful.

(You forgot to capitalize the C in Cherry. And you need to capaitalize the I in I’ll and forgot the comma… oof.)

(sorry I'm doing this on my phone and I'm still getting used to like checking while typing instead I'm writing a bunch and then checking back later.)

(It’s cool, just pointing it out…)

Makayla had remained quiet for most of the time. Her friends were all in separate classes at the time that it had happened…did they get out okay? God, I hope so…please… She still didn't say anything as she made her way to the hunting, fishing, and basically everything else remotely outdoorsy section of the store. Knives, a few guns…Maybe I can rig a snare or something with the fishing string. I'll talk to Cherry or Edmund about it later. Though Cherry came off as a bit eccentric, Makayla admitted that she was smart. She'd have to be to make zombie gas. And Edmund didn't exactly seem stupid either.

(by the way, is the Walmart abandoned or something? Is anybody in there? Lol nobody's saying anything about two high school kids going into the surveillance room but it's the middle of the day–a weekday, I might add, since they were in school–so I figured I'd ask)

(Well it’s closed, but they were way too lazy to get all the stuff out of the store… well that’s what I believe..)

(Kayla and Ari should be in the store.)

Val nodded “yeah but some stuff like milk and fruits will go bad quickly,” she said. “Most of the canned and some boxed stuff will last us a while.” Her voice was very monotone. She was still in shock about well everything.

Kayla shrugged. “They already entered… but thanks for telling me!”
She sighed and went over to the food section, she went inside the Deli and saw that they still had fresh ingredients inside. Sweet! Even more food! Kayla started to put them in a cart and bring them over to the cold section, and placed them in one of the freezers.

(RIP not to sound like a dictator or whatever but please, none of us are good at English so can you try not to point out mistakes? Thanks)

Dial finally made it to Walmart just as the school doors slammed open to reveal some very strange looking kids swarming out like wasps. And everyone hates wasps.

Cherry saw one of the kids foaming at the mouth and smacked them on the head with the bat. "Not today beech."

Kayla grabbed a microphone connected to the intercom. “Is that everyone?”
(No seriously, is it?)

(Let me check if we do have everyone.)

(We have everyone. We only have five characters, and four people.)

Makayla heard Ari over the intercom and swore under her breath. She saw one coming at her and fired off a quick shot, hitting it in the head. The zombie fell down, but more were coming. Nonononono… Ari put a few knives meant for skinning animals in her pockets, thankfully covered by their sheaths. Ammo went in there as well. I'll get more if I can come back. Not that there's a whole heck of a lot of it…so I'll need to use it sparingly. And with that, Makayla got the heck out of there and went to find the others.

Kayla rushed to the window and to use a heavy winter jacket along with a face mask and began to bash the Zombies out of the window, or even fully kill them. Once she got all of the ones entering she threw the body’s out and blocked the window with the remaining boards and nails. She looked behind her and one single Zombie remained. It seemed to be a child who was infected. Instead of killing it, she bashed its legs and arms, and chucked it into the emergency room (as in a room to keep old folks and employees in, some huge stores have it, or at least that’s what Wikipedia said… this is a weird ass Walmart.) she closed the door after she threw him in and locked it. She took a deep breath. “All clear…” She lost balance and fell on the floor, she was knocked out cold. (Don’t worry she’s not infected, it’s just a side effect of hers… she probably won’t wake up for like what an hour?)

(Oof sorry it was so long. Also those legs and arms are just squished.

(Lol that’s hillarious.)

Kayla’s eyes blinked open and she began to moan. “What….”
She looked exhausted, and was. She could hardly stay awake. “What…happened…?”

Kayla closed her eyes again and fell asleep. Her arms dropped, as if she was knocked out again.