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Favorite ship in your stories?

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@Darkblossom group

Ugh I love romance but I have zero experience with it and so don’t know if I am really writing it realistically but whatever here we go

Enderstorm and Foxchild. Enderstorm is the Empress of the Three Dimensions. She also has depression, a mildly traumatic childhood, no friends except her adopted father, and a disease which makes her sweat blood occasionally. Foxchild’s relatively normal, except for the fact that he is a where-beast like the Empress. She meets him by chance, gets a major crush which temporarily cures her depression, he rejects her after a party where she gets pretty drunk, they become close friends, he is hired to kill her,(did I mention he is a trained assassin?) stuff happens, she falls back in love with him but for real this time, happily ever after until her dad dies and her depression resurfaces.

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WHOA. Crushes do not fix depression. Not at all. Love does not fix depression. To say so is to say that all you need is a hot dude/chick and everything will be better. To do so really discredits the real problems people with depression actually have. Also it pushes a subtext that hot human = cure, so therefore you just need the right person that you don't have yet. Bad idea. Sorry for kind of jumping on you, but I thought it might be important to say.

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@Darkblossom group

Okay thank you! Let me rewrite that: it temporarily helps her ignore her depression. Does that make more sense? Because if not, then a big part of my story just falls apart.

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OMG I have this one ship: Thea & Lauren
Ok, It's really weird because Lauren is actually a boy, so it's not clear and I have to change the name
And Thea's original name was Ezrra but that also made no sense so……. don't as I'm weird! :p XD

So basically, Thea is like this amazing and smart war expert. She can be super serious, but also a tiny bit funny, and she grew up in a battlefield basically. She is the best at everything athletic

Lauren is this funny and awesome boy who is head over heels for Thea. He grew up in the city and is a famous ice skater. He always tries to charm Thea, but she's basically oblivious and immune to his "charms" until one day when she starts to develop a crush, and from then on it's basically just them liking each other and it's so obvious to everyone but them

In the end they get together XD

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Victor and Henry: Both are kind of disasters who bond and level up from Disaster Individuals to Disaster Boyfriends. Victor is a chemist and Henry is a baseball player and both are in college together and share an apartment.
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Iam and Vivian: When Vivian arrives in the spring court she takes up politics alongside King Iam and they become a political power couple in public and awkward dorks in private.
Cedar and Giana: Team up to find Ophelia after Lucas's attempt fails. They help each other along the way because Giana has a bad limp from a broken foot that healed wrong. She's stubborn, he's stubborn, and they both bicker and banter.
Esther and Maia: Bond over their former time as Oleander's forced wives, and slowly start to heal together. Maia is very small and snarky, and Esther translates what Maia signs to everyone else. Esther is very sweet, bubbly, and determined to defend everyone she can.
Lucas and Ophelia: Grew up together at the orphanage and fall in love. When Ophelia is kidnapped, Lucas is the first to go after her, even though it nearly gets him killed.

@aeroncollins

I have three ships and they're all from the same series lol.

First is Silver and Kaiden, they are both boys and were together during their college years until Silver's arranged marriage that he didn't want to do. Silver and Kaiden were forced to break up due to the arranged marriage. Silver inherited the crown because he was a prince (he is currently king), and Kaiden trained to be a royal messenger so that he could work alongside Silver and spend time with him even though they couldn't be together.

Second is Skarlett and Jay. Skarlett is a girl and Jay is a boy. They met while Skarlett was on a mission for Silver, and she stumbled across Jay's lair. He offered to help her with the mission and she agreed. He went with her and they became friends. After the mission, he moved closer to the forest where Skarlett lived so that they could hang out. They recognized their feelings for each other in the second book (there are six books total) but never acted on them until the fourth book. In that book, they became an official couple.

Third is Zurie and Amila. They're both girls. Amila met Silver in the third book and became his friend. Zurie was Silver's roommate in college. They met in the fourth book when Zurie came back to the realm that Silver and Amila and the rest of the kingdom lived in. She and Amila met and hated each other at first, but it was revealed that they care about each other when Amila accidentally revealed her feelings for Zurie while telling her to stop getting into trouble because she would be miserable if she lost Zurie. They became friends after that, then a couple in book five.

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Okay thank you! Let me rewrite that: it temporarily helps her ignore her depression. Does that make more sense? Because if not, then a big part of my story just falls apart.

Yeah that makes sense. That is realistic.

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@Darkblossom group

Okay thank you for the help!

Blue butterbeer

I have 2 girls they’re best friends, and one of them is a little homophobe, but they start getting attracted to each other, and even though she’s trying to ignore it the feeling gets so strong that she has to admit it

@primaldesire

I also love my baby Klaus! He is an adorable Geman, werewolf baby! He hated Alex at first, which is understandable. The man was being rude and was being a big pain in the ass. As they went along their adventure, he started to see sides of Alex that he could have never imagined. He realized that Alex wasn't all vines and memes. Alex had so many thick layers to protect himself. Klaus also realized he was slowly falling in love with him. He felt it was wrong considering that Alex was still holding onto the grief of his late girlfriend. Even Alex couldn't deny that he also had feelings. He didn't think it was right. He thought that Klaus would hurt him or, even worse, Alex would hurt Klaus. But every time he saw Klaus smile or laugh at his stupid jokes, he gets painfully reminded of someone he would never get again.
Then Glitch stepped in. She advised both of them separately that if they have feelings for the other that they should try to act on them. Alex just argued that "we are nothing and that we have a mission." Klaus, well, tried. He kept trying to get close but Alex's defensive barriers got in the way.
Soon after the mission was over and everyone was more relaxed and happy, Klaus did it. He asked Alex out. Alex was flabbergasted(I think I used that right). He couldn't possibly comprehend what a nice man like him would want with a dead beat. After a while of stumbling over his words, he finally just said yes.
The two are a good pair. Though they may argue, one of them comes running back to the other. Alex life was turned upside down when Klaus asked to stay over in his place. Let's just say, there was a lot of cuddling involved.

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@Reblod flag

Eeeh I'll indulge myself just this once

Mara and Kado. Mostly a platonic relationship although Kado might have felt something a bit more at some point. Originally, Mara hated Kado but sort of became a mentor for him. They ended up travelling the world and fighting together. Their relationship was actually quite wholesome until the fire bitch attacked (aka Mara). Basically, she went crazy, tried to kill Kado and then brought death, war and anarchy upon the lands. After that, things just went sideways.

Orien and Ahmik. I finally decided to make their relationship canon in this story and also an actual subplot. Their first meeting involved Ahmik trying to murder Orien. They absolutely despised each other but Ahmik stuck around because Orien was his only hope in saving his people. Things happened and they figured out that they weren't so bad after all and ended up becoming good friends. Ahmik is a huge flirt no matter who you are and after some time it started to affect Orien a little. He was confused. To add to the angsty-ness, Ahmik repressed his homosexuality due to some very violent events in his past to the point of breaking down when he has to confront it and Orien was raised in a society where things not considered normal were punished.

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