Notebook.ai

I'd love to critique for you~ [JUST OPENED!!]

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@an-awful-disaster group

Invalid Character (I hope this isn't bothersome to you.)

Jack

Hi! Could you look at Carlos he's my first character and i'd love some criticism

@Clinquant

Thank you so much, this is so helpful. To be honest, i don't really know what 'prejudice' means. My first language isn't english and yes - google translator can tell me translation but i still have no clue what it actually means, even if i look for further explanations. I guess i'm just stupid, sorryyy

Kiley

could you do mine? Jayden Regan Apex

@mintchocolatechip

Hey! I know you have a lot of requests coming in, but if you have the time would you critique my protagonist Marshall? Invalid Character thank you so much!

@CurtisFamWriters

Elliott (Macnon) you can take your time on this one

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@sm0kysoulcynics group

HELLO I HAVE A CHARACTER [[-]] [[Location-157942]] Luna Hannah Ravenpaw

Alexandra

could you critique my character? Invalid Character

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@Story_Siren group

Could you critique my childs?

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Amber group

Ok I have been working on this guy in my head for a while. Hea the matchmaking, advice giver at your coffe shop. It would be cool if you could look at him. Invalid Character

@NicsWriter257

Hiya,
Please could you give me a helping hand with my main leading man?
Huge thanks, in advance etc xxx

Nicky xxx