To confirm, each of them has a divine parent. In classic Irish mythology, gods/demigods tend to age faster, both physically and mentally, so Calum's mind at ten would be more like seventeen.
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Here is my child Lucas. Thank you!!
Can you critique him please? I'm not very descriptive so sorry in advance
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Thanks in advance!
Hi! You've already looked my character over, but I've made a few changes and I was hoping you could do it again.
(One thing you suggested was to have her not fall into the Batman/Superman trope, and I haven't really mentioned it in the character page, but trust me, she gets mad and hates her pseudo-job at times. The first chapter is basically her complaining about how she always has to bail people out - in nicer terms, of course lol. Her main inspiration for becoming a superhero was her foster mother; she's basically following in her footsteps, and her hero work does take a toll on her social life, so hopefully that fixes the whole trope thing.)
In addition to the one above, can you also look over these three?