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Thank you so much for your feedback! You've given me a lot to think about. :)

@Joneathan What you have for Lune is pretty good, though you should add a little more. Her personality, flaws, hobbies, talents, and history are a little bare. You do have a bunch of spelling er...

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@Libraleap One big question: how common is immortality, and how did Asmodeus become immortal? What is his 'origin story', per say? Other than that, my main concern with Asmodeus is that *ever...

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Hi! Would you mind looking over my characters? Andrea: https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/210241 Ethan: https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/210340 Luke: https://www.notebook.ai/plan/c...

Thank you so much for your feedback! It was very helpful :)

Hi! Would you mind looking over these characters? Andrea: https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/210241 Ethan: https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/210340 Luke: https://www.notebook.ai/pla...

@traditionalartist I really like this whole list format. Nice. You should definitely figure out a proper origin story for Danny. 'Something happened' is not enough. Also, it seems a little wei...

Sorry for the delay! But I'm back now, so let's dive right in. @Celestial-B So, Harmony. You say that she's 'oblivious' and 'often walks straight into danger' but then say that she's good at...