I Will Critique For You!

Hello Lovlies -

I enjoy critiquing characters, so that's why I'm here!

Disclaimer
None of what I say is meant to be offensive you or anyone in any way. It's just advice!
I do usually go pretty in depth with my explanations so bear with me, my responses my take some time, but that doesn't mean I will not respond. I'll try to get to everyone in order and be fair.

Thanks!

-Eris

But of course!

oh! uh. Okay. Any one of them?

Fern! You got it

My two MC's, please?

Hi! Hope it's okay if I drop one of mine off: Leo Mun Thanks in advance, please don't be afraid to be harsh :-)

Richter Just keepin ya busy so I added a surprise second!
Jacqueline Ash It's like a buddy cop paranormal investigator thing.

Disclaimer they aren't finished but I wanted to get writing early on and see where I can evolve em down the line ya know.

Hello Lovlies -

I enjoy critiquing characters, so that's why I'm here!

Disclaimer
None of what I say is meant to be offensive you or anyone in any way. It's just advice!
I do usually go pretty in depth with my explanations so bear with me, my responses my take some time, but that doesn't mean I will not respond. I'll try to get to everyone in order and be fair.

Thanks!

-Eris

Hi! I’m hoping you might critique my only character, Seraphine. She doesn’t have a whole lot of stuff on her profile, so maybe some feedback on what to put? And maybe some suggestions on how to flesh her out more? Thank you, I hope I’m not being a pain!

Hey guys! I would love to do all your characters.
I had a death in the family over the weekend, so my responses are going to be a little delayed. I have NOT forgotten about you guys though. <3
I will get to everyone this week I promise.

Do my Protag (shared perspective with another character)

Or my antagonist?

Hey guys! I would love to do all your characters.
I had a death in the family over the weekend, so my responses are going to be a little delayed. I have NOT forgotten about you guys though. <3
I will get to everyone this week I promise.

That's really unfortunate! :( Please take care of yourself and your health, they are a priority.

Dude that's all good especially if it's something that serious. We all hope you're doing okay.