I honestly dunno

God I'm nervous…

THAT'S REALLY GOOD BRUH I'D LOVE TO SEE MORE

Wanna read the rest of what I have so far? On that one?

Do do do

SURE!

Okay…but it gets worse. Kinda have a little writers' block right now so at the end it gets confusing and my grammar sucks.

So am I

Here goes nothin…

“Good,” the boy blurted, “I mean . . . I’m glad. I’ve missed you, ever since you left me alone in the forest. I-I thought I would never find you.” He was shaking, obviously as nervous talking to her as she was to him
What does he mean, she thought. She had never seen him before in her life, or so she thought. She had grown up with only a mother, just her, not a brother. But with the dreams, and sudden memories, she knew it had to be true. But how?
“I’m sorry, but what? I didn’t even know you before today, and now you’re going to come here and tell me you’re my brother,” she dragged out the word brother, finding it hard to accept. “And if I never knew you how would I of ever been able to leave you,” she was crying, she couldn’t hold it in anymore. This was all too much.
“Sophie, what do you mean you don’t remember . . .? We grew up together, just you and me. We fought together and supported each other . . . well until a year ago I mean.” His voice was calm. He spoke to her like she was one of her mother’s pieces of valuable china and anything too sudden could break her.
“I don’t know, I’ve been having dreams lately. I’ve seen you, we were walking in the woods, and just last night I had one of us when we were both young playing in a pile of dirt. I don’t know what's going on . . .” Sophia admitted. She wiped off her tear-filled eyes with the hem of her shirt and refused to look at Jenson.
“Oh Sophie, I’m so sorry. I wish I could help you . . .” He stood up suddenly grabbing her hand “Wait, I might be able to a little bit. Follow me.”
Reluctantly Sophia followed him. He led her through many alleyways and fields, and after she felt as if they’d been running for more than twenty minutes he stopped.
They were outside a gas station, well at least it used to be a gas station. This place looked like no one had been inside for at least a few years. What are we doing here Sophia wondered, looking at Jenson with a confused look.
“I’ve traveled for a year to find you, as you know, but there’s something I think you really should see. Follow me.” He walked into the gas station, not even looking back to see if she was following.
She ran after him, he led her into a back room that at one point may have been a break room for employees. From outside the place looked beat up and old, but here, it was a totally different story. The room was completely cleaned. It had beautiful furniture and a counter full of snacks, but what surprised her the most were the pictures. There were maybe thirty pictures filling a wall, some were of just her, just Jenson, but the one that confused her the most was a picture of two very nicely dressed people.
There was a man and a woman, maybe in about their thirties, Sophia couldn’t tell exactly. They were standing in front of what looked like a huge mansion, there were hills and a stable in the picture also. Jenson grabbed a glass of water and handed it to me, pulling me over to a couch and telling me to sit.
“Who are those people?” Sophia questioned.
“Oh, them…? That’s mom and dad . . . before they died.” Anyone talking to him at that point could tell that he was holding back tears.
“Oh, I’m sorry.” Sophia looked down at the couch, feeling horrible for bringing it up.
“It’s fine, after everything you forgot I wouldn’t expect you to remember. We were young, you were six I was seven. And now to explain why I brought you here.” He had a pained look on his face, Sophia could tell he wasn’t about to tell her the whole truth.
Sophia nodded slightly, her eyes wandering around the room. The more she looked the more it seemed familiar like she’d been somewhere exactly like it in the past. She looked at Jenson, waiting for him to begin explaining.
“This room is an exact replica of the last place we lived before mom and dad died,” he started. “I mean other than the pictures it’s completely the same.” He grabbed a pillow from the couch and hugged it close to his chest. His eyes confused Sophia, sometimes they made him look confident. Other times they were full of pain. Just looking at them you could tell he’d gone through horrible things, some she may have caused.

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IT"S GOOD BRO!!!
I'm definitely intrigued and I want to keep reading!

You sure…?

YA MAN IT'S FAB party poppers

Hehe… guess I'll have to keep writing. Any suggestions? I'm kind of at a loss for ideas.

Well…pintrest is a good place to find prompts

Yah, I've been looking all day. Nothing seems to fit just right.

Hmmm well can you fill me in on characters and locations and stuff? What kind of genre do you want this to be?

Hmm well Sophia's character is pretty much shown in the story. Jemson is the mysterious yet confident type of person. He's very protective of his younger sister. Not sure of any characters I will add in the future atm. The story takes place in modern day New York. I'm deciding between turning this towards a Sci-Fi or fantasy story but that will all depend on how she lost her memory, if you know what I mean.

I think and I'm just spitballing, that Sci-fi would be a good direction to take this. And a really helpful thing is using the Myers Briggs Personality Test to find out personalities if you haven't already done that…

Hm that could be helpful. I might make it where her family, her real one with her brother, is from another dimension. But something happened where she was sent to where she is now, and her memories were replaced.

That sounds good! Should I link the website to you?

Yah sure

https://www.16personalities.com/free-personality-test
here ya go!

Thanks mate!

No problemo bruh hope it helps!

So, wanna tell me about the story you're working on?

OH ABSOLUTELY which one?

That's completely up to you

Oh boy…uh….shoot I'll just ell you bout the main one

K so my main character, Allegra Gray, sneaks ontot a spaceship with her bff Ellis. They get caught but can't be returned cus they're already so far from earth. So it's basically just her makin frens and traversing the universe
(that sounded lame)

No, that's really cool!

Thanks! THAT REALLY MEANS A LOT!

It's totally true! Wanna hear a random, unnecessary, fact about me? :D