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'Take off your underwear,' he said. This was a first. He had called me sexual insults like slut and whore and such since I was 8, but never this.
Choppy, mechanic, and emotionless. Try harder.
I guess this was a tipping point for him. I resisted. He was angry now. He pinned me to the ground, and forcefully removed them. Then he put his… thing… inside me. I was in so much pain then.
Again, emotionless and choppy. "This would go on until I was 18 years old. It hurt so much. He kept calling me things like cunt, twat, dyke, etc while he… raped me.
Again with the "etc."? Then he… came inside of me. It was gross and weird. I hated it. Then he told me not to tell anyone or he would do it again. I didn't tell anyone, until I turned 18. It was terrible.
Congratulations, you managed to make it even more graphic and gross. Also "gross" and "weird" are pretty weak adjectives for this scenario. * "I tried to kill myself. Twice. Everytime I attempted to kill myself, he would rape me. I felt like I didnt mean anything, like I was just a toy for pervs to use and look at. I hated myself. But at last, I found help."* Comes out of nowhere.
Tbh I'd either do more research or just drop it.