Yeah, idk. Is this excessive? He has an almost constant stutter that's worse when he's excited or agitated… I just introduced him into the story and realized this might be a problem.
“Well…” he paused, trying to think of the right words, before blurting out, “The whole village thinks I sto –I sto –I took rations. Or they’re g-going to. Because some of the rations are missing. That I did –didn’t take.” He took another deep breath and painstakingly bit out, “I wanted General Nyir to help me. But then I saw Sacia and you followed her. I knew you two are my friends, almost. Kind of. Maybe?” He shook his head, waving away the extraneous thoughts. “Plea…please help?”
Was that hard to read? Or really exhausting? Any tips to make it flow better without sacrificing his stutter?