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HELP I KINDA WANT MY CHARACTERS TO KISS BUT IM NOT SURE IF ITS THE RIGHT TIME AND I DONT KNOW HOW TO WRITE KISS CAUSE IVE NEVER KISSED
HELPIf this is not the biggest gosh darn mood lol
well She is sick and can barely speak, His heart is torn to pieces from watching her suffer and this seems like a good moment to have them smooch…
nah, ill get them close to smooching then the younger brother of Him to walk in.
Would she remember kissing or does the poison erase the effects?
Also is she ever completely lucid during this? It's considered kind of wrong when someone kisses someone else who is drunk/high/otherwise has their inhibitions affected when they are sober/uninhibited
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Would she remember kissing or does the poison erase the effects?
Also is she ever completely lucid during this? It's considered kind of wrong when someone kisses someone else who is drunk/high/otherwise has their inhibitions affected when they are sober/uninhibited
she will remember at a really random time. but they never actually kiss, they just get close. I just finished writing that part, the doc is up on this page. pls review!
I never wrote anything like this cause im so worried to get it wrong or that my parents will find it
https://www.notebook.ai/documents/234805
I need help with filler scenes… im no good with those. I wrote this all during NaNoWriMo last year.
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https://www.notebook.ai/documents/234805
I need help with filler scenes… im no good with those. I wrote this all during NaNoWriMo last year.
it doesn't appear to be public, hon
Would she remember kissing or does the poison erase the effects?
Also is she ever completely lucid during this? It's considered kind of wrong when someone kisses someone else who is drunk/high/otherwise has their inhibitions affected when they are sober/uninhibitedshe will remember at a really random time. but they never actually kiss, they just get close. I just finished writing that part, the doc is up on this page. pls review!
I never wrote anything like this cause im so worried to get it wrong or that my parents will find it
Alr cool!
I'll read it when I can :D I'm excited
Man whay the hell ☹️ what did Jasmine do to deserve that
Also her friends' dedication is so sweet, if anything bad happens to them I'll go on a rampage
https://www.notebook.ai/documents/234805
I need help with filler scenes… im no good with those. I wrote this all during NaNoWriMo last year.
it doesn't appear to be public, hon
Fixed it
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Man whay the hell ☹️ what did Jasmine do to deserve that
Also her friends' dedication is so sweet, if anything bad happens to them I'll go on a rampage
omg
I am mad with Author Power all of the sudden💥
im glad you like it!! you just gave me a huuuuge confidence boost, friend
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https://www.notebook.ai/documents/234805
I need help with filler scenes… im no good with those. I wrote this all during NaNoWriMo last year.
it doesn't appear to be public, hon
Fixed it
ooo, you done lots over here! nice👍
I kept changing pronouns on accident… i change from I/Me so She/Her. its suppose to be compleatly 1st person..
Man whay the hell ☹️ what did Jasmine do to deserve that
Also her friends' dedication is so sweet, if anything bad happens to them I'll go on a rampageomg
I am mad with Author Power all of the sudden💥
im glad you like it!! you just gave me a huuuuge confidence boost, friend
glad i could be of service! :)
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so im curious can we like share our story on here and yall give tips or feedback..?
so im curious can we like share our story on here and yall give tips or feedback..?
what I've gleaned from being here is that it's a place to talk about writing generally and share feedback and writing :)
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oh!! asome
drive_eta
ok so would you say its plagiarism if you have a story and you based the story off a game and took a characters design and name but changed it up a bit?
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ok so would you say its plagiarism if you have a story and you based the story off a game and took a characters design and name but changed it up a bit?
if you try to pretend its original, yes. As long as you're willing to admit the origins of the story, character, and name, then no, it's a fanfic, like a million other great things :)
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so im curious can we like share our story on here and yall give tips or feedback..?
This works too! You can certainly do this if you want :)
drive_eta
ok so would you say its plagiarism if you have a story and you based the story off a game and took a characters design and name but changed it up a bit?
if you try to pretend its original, yes. As long as you're willing to admit the origins of the story, character, and name, then no, it's a fanfic, like a million other great things :)
thanks! i based my story of of FNAF
drive_eta
so im curious can we like share our story on here and yall give tips or feedback..?
This works too! You can certainly do this if you want :)
also if I PM you the story will you give me your feedback and tips
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so im curious can we like share our story on here and yall give tips or feedback..?
This works too! You can certainly do this if you want :)
also if I PM you the story will you give me your feedback and tips
sure :)
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Struggling to properly describe sounds in my writing-
Onomatopoeias and stuff, I know, but full-on songs are the problem points.
Music is decently important to my worldbuilding, so I can get joy avoid it for so long-
drive_eta
its good to work on things you airnt good at
pets
Yeah, I get that, but I was looking for something more specific, y'know /nm
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hey im here to lissten and help
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Struggling to properly describe sounds in my writing-
Onomatopoeias and stuff, I know, but full-on songs are the problem points.
Music is decently important to my worldbuilding, so I can get joy avoid it for so long-
if i may, in 'book of a thousand days' (a great read, totally recommend) the main character sings on separate notable occasions and 'the mucker songs' are something notable in story and worldbuilding, you could check it out.
but the way i'd do it would be:
"the melody had a jaunty note about it. up and down the song went, he sang so loudly everyone was forced to listen. the sound was more like one you'd hear in a bar full of drunken sailors rather than a cold, harsh night like this. but it did it's job and people began joining in and laughing."
or
"the melancholy sound was so sad it could make a statue cry. her song carried over the distance, the depressing highs and sudden low would make one think there was a funeral. apart from teary tune it was beautiful."
i hope this may help :)
drive_eta
thats some pretty solid advise
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("she quietly hummed her favorite melody as she settled in. a 'la dee da' here, and a "hum hu-hum' there she quickly fell fast asleep.")
(these are kinda fun to write lol)
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("she quietly hummed her favorite melody as she settled in. a 'la dee da' here, and a "hum hu-hum' there she quickly fell fast asleep.")
(these are kinda fun to write lol)
interesting vearry intresting
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("she quietly hummed her favorite melody as she settled in. a 'la dee da' here, and a "hum hu-hum' there she quickly fell fast asleep.")
(these are kinda fun to write lol)interesting vearry intresting
hello, yes that's me /j
