Raven rapidly tried to catch the objects, but was unsuccessful as one of them hit her and knocked her out of the sky. She was flush into a parked bus, glass raining down around her.
Connor grinned wickedly and landed beside her.
"It's OVER, Raven."
Raven heaved herself up and started to crawl away. "This isn't you, Connor. Snap out of it."
"I don't know what you're talking about!" Connor sneered.
"Please Connor, come back to me!" Raven pleaded, voice cracking. She flinched when Connor pulled out a fire sword, but feeling around her she found a sword of the ground.
"I am not Connor!" he yelled, preparing to slam the fire sword down on Raven.
"STOP!" Raven's father yelled in Connor's head. "I've changed my mind. Bring her to me. Alive."
Connor froze, then lowered the weapon. "Get up," he ordered.
Raven was defiant. She didn't want to give in to Connor - well, her father - but was willing to do anythibg to save him.
”Get UP,” he demanded, grabbing her upper arm roughly and yanking her up.
"Get off me, Connor! I'll come willingly."
”I’m not taking chances,” he growled and began to lead her to her father’s house.
Raven reluctantly let into Connor's grasp and let him lead her.
Connor reached the house sooner than later. He knocked (pounded) on the door.
(I'm going to skip forward a little)
"You deserve everything that happens to you!" Raven's father yelled, punching her. She fell to the ground, bleeding from her nose. He then turned to Connor. "Thank you. You are no longer needed." He took Connor into a hold of black magic which slowly started tightening.
(Wait, at this point, should he be evil still?)
(yes. I have a plan for when he changes back)
(Okay)
Connor grinned wickedly and watched.
(wait, no. Connor's in the hold of black magic, not raven)
(I know. Can’t he move?)
(not really
I'm confused because you said 'Connor grinned wickedly and watched', which makes no sense considering his predicament)
(I thought he could move inside the stuff. If he can't, ignore that. Sorry!)
Raven couldn't stand Connor's pained groans. She knew that there were her father's men trying to corner her, but she ignored them. "Stop! Father, please!"
"Shut up, child!"
"You can break my soul, beat me, hurt me, kill me if you want. But for the love of God, don't hurt him."
"Well, I was planning on it anyway. But since you asked nicely… I'll kill him humanely," Raven's father said, making a gun appeared.
Connor watched.
(? I'm really sorry, I just don't know what Connor should be doing, especially if he can't move.)
(don't worry, I have it planned.
Btw, this reply will be long)
"NO!" Raven screamed as her father shot Connor. She fell to her knees and a blast of chaos was sent out, knocking the men to the floor (like Scarlet Witch). She cried as Connor's body shook as the bullets entered, watching him fall to the ground. She ran over and pulled his body onto her knees, sobbing. With his head in her elbow, she looked at her father. "Bring him back! Please!"
"No can do."
"Take me instead! Bring him back and you can have me!" She looked upwards. "You can take control of my mind and making me fall from up there if you bring him back!"
Her father thought for a minute. "Deal." Almost immediately, Raven felt herself being taken control of as she started walking towards the place she was going to die from.
(so they are currently in a really fancy building with high ceilings.
You can bring Connor back now too. He's not under mind control tho)
Connor blinked. Where… He looked around. “Raven!” He got up and ran to her. “What are you doing? Come on, let’s get out of here!”
Raven punched Connor, then kicked him into the wall. Her father was using her hand-to-hand combat training. Inside, Raven was screaming and crying. She didn't want to do this. But she had to. She started climbing the stairs.
Connor gasped for breath, but he got up and ran after her again. He grabbed her hand. “Raven, no! You know what you’re doing! Stop it! Stop!”
Connor gasped for breath, but he got up and ran after her again. He grabbed her hand. “Raven, no! You know what you’re doing! Stop it! Stop!”
