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Circus RP (Closed)

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@blue_topaz

Griffin brought his knees to his chest. “I could’ve saved her…”

@blue_topaz

Pretty good, I’ve finished fleshing out all the characters and I’m almost done mapping out the plot. I’m currently trying out two different art styles, I’m not sure which to use)

(Huh, you could try it out on me, I wouldn't mind!)

Erm, I’m not sure how to post pictures, but they’re both basically the type of art that has a defined shape but no black lines surrounding it, you know? Like, the only thing differentiating one shape from another is the colour. Anyways, one of them is slightly more towards the style of art in The Lumberjanes and Nimona, and the other is a bit more…. mature I guess? A bit like manga but not really.)

Which would you guys rather see in a comic?

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@PuffPoff

Ana grinned. "That felt awesome." She giggled. Eli laughed manically. "Awesome?! This feels f-ing amazing!"

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@PuffPoff

(personally I like the first style)

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(I think both are really cool!)

@blue_topaz

(Thanks! Have you guys read Nimona?)

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Lia looked up and frowned. "Where are the cops? Please tell me they'll actually show up this time."

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@PuffPoff

(no not yet, but it's on my list. I just finished reading the Amulet series)

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(Thanks! Have you guys read Nimona?)

I haven't read it but I've heard of it!

@blue_topaz

Suddenly, sirens sounded.

@blue_topaz

(Thanks! Have you guys read Nimona?)

I haven't read it but I've heard of it!

OH MY GOD YOU HAVE TO IT IS SO GOOD!

@amber_is_in_a_loop

(In a comic I'd say the Lumberjanes)

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"That was convenient," Jace said and watched as a few cop cars pulled up.
"Hey, guys, the police are here!" Lia went in to tell Griffin and Leo.

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@PuffPoff

Eli ran up to the police with Ana trailing behind him.

@amber_is_in_a_loop

Leo patted Griffin on the shoulder. "Not your fault," he repeated before heading off to meet the police.

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@PuffPoff

(I have to go for now bye!)

@blue_topaz

Same bye)

@blue_topaz

And also—- in the comic, they find out that the murderer has been targeting the circus for a while, making the murder a seen like accidents. Should I include ghosts. [like the ghosts of the victims] or no?)

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@PuffPoff

(Oohh ghosts would be a good way to reveal information that the characters don't know)

@amber_is_in_a_loop

(…and then we could have Ella's ghost, and she could help them)

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@PuffPoff

(^I didn't even think of that yes!)

@blue_topaz

(OMG YESYESYES)

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(Yes! That would be cool!)

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(Hello! Good afternoon)

@blue_topaz

heyo!)

@amber_is_in_a_loop

(Hey!)

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@PuffPoff

(hi!)

@blue_topaz

Leo patted Griffin on the shoulder. "Not your fault," he repeated before heading off to meet the police.

Griffin stayed behind, watching the two men.

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Lia waited as her brother talked to the police. She was nervous, but not sure why exactly. She sat down, waiting for this to all be over, and for them to be taken away to safety.

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@PuffPoff

Eli walked up with Jace and helped him talk to the police. Ana stood back with Lia, still rubbing her cheek.