Critique my main character?

make sure that you put anything that you don't want anyone else to see yet or spoilers in your private notes section, so you don't forget them!!

OH MY GOSH I LOVE THIS CHARACTER I CAN'T FIND ANYTHING TO CRITIQUE IM SORRY AHHHHHHHH I LOVE MARNIE THIS IS A REALLY GREAT CHARACTER LOVE IT ALSO GOOD LUCK IN WRITING HER!

I agree with the above comment!!! This is a fantastic character. Great job!