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Overview

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Kohmir

Age

19

Gender

Male

Other names

Raven

Role

MC, Son of the Raven

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Looks

Facial Hair

Always clean-shaven

Hair Style

A neat crew cut

Hair Color

Pitch black

Height

5’10

Weight

180 pounds

Identifying Marks

A deep, white scar right over his heart, a stab wound
Wears a lot of jewelry and eyeliner (and occasionally borrows Lysia's lipstick), specifically a pair of steel raven earrings

Body Type

Lean, athletic

Skin Tone

Olive

Race

Dyszui

Eye Color

Honey brown

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Nature

Prejudices

Gets easily annoyed at the lofty, mellow type of person.
Actually cautious around any race he doesn’t know well (humans, Night Children, woodland creatures)

Condition(s)

Sexuality- straight demi

Mannerisms

  • He walks very-straight backed, confident and proud

  • His voice has a natural musical and husky sound to it, and you can easily hear the smile or the frown in it

  • Walks with his arms loose and by his side, ready to act

  • He walks at a normal pace, and very quietly because he’s always alert

  • His mouth twitches a lot since he tries to contain his emotions when he’s talking

  • Squints his eyes or blinks a lot, to better focus himself on people

  • Often kind of gazes at people when they’re talking to him with a dreamy kind of expression (his mind is constantly running a mile a minute)

  • He gets very loud when he’s angry, and uses a lot of hand gestures to express annoyance or to chide someone

  • When hurt or sad, he’ll be more forward and sharp and unrelenting, also has less of a filter

  • When he gets excited, it’s hard to tell. He’ll walk faster and sometimes lets out a skip or turn or something

  • Often likes slowing down to breathe in the air and admire the sky, and looking around to appreciate wherever he is

  • When gets uncontrollably emotional he isolates himself and waits it out, either training or meditating to get some of it out

Motivations

  • Yanni, who is the absolute best thing in his life.

  • One part of him wants vengeance. He knows that his parents didn’t deserve to die, and needs to exact the pain Midas caused him back- an eye for an eye.

  • The other part of him wants to silence the soldier inside of him so he can settle down and live out his life peacefully and surrounded only by his friends and (maybe) family

  • He’d be ready to lay down his life for either Yanni, the platonic love of his life, or Lysia, the person he admires most

  • He will protect and defend without fail

Flaws

  • Losing Yanni. He has put EVERYTHING he is into her and losing her would be losing himself. He’s had to find himself and piece himself together once already, and he’s not sure he’d have the strength to do it again.

  • He’s private about his backstory

  • Strong emotion is strange to him and he isn’t open about his feelings, ever

  • Can get cocky and rowdy when he’s riled up

  • Extremely competitive and cutthroat, always pushes himself to his absolute limits and is quite hard on himself

  • He’s ruthless and unmovable. If you’ve done him or someone else wrong, you deserve whatever is decided is coming to you

  • Unapologetic about what isn’t worth it to him. But he does care a LOT when he cares

Talents

A phenomenal fighter, both with weapons or hand to hand.
An excellent memory and fluent in a number of languages.
A walking encyclopaedia, especially when it comes to plants.
Easily intimidating and strangely skilled at picking fights, though he doesn’t if it’s unnecessary.

Hobbies

Training and studying/reading; his hobbies fill his extra time.
Although he fights a lot (with his army), it doesn’t make him happy. He just needs to be ready when he gets the chance to avenge his family.

Personality type

Would make a scene if someone’s done something wrong, or to defend Yanni (or any of his friends for that matter).
He’s a naturally strong, scary guy, but he’s given himself a people-loving, protective, loyal, sweet side. He’s proud of where he is with his life and cherishes his new family (the crew).
Kohmir respects and knows himself. He knows his limits, and is constantly challenging himself. He’s a very stable, intimidating character. He acts rationally (most of the time), loyally and bravely -nothing will make him back down from a fight. He’s definitely a force to be reckoned with.
Intimidated by what he can’t control, but he never backs down. He was stopped from helping once, and it isn’t happening again

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Social

Favorite food

Prefers lighter food, like vegetables or fruits.
Has a soft spot for stew for some reason

Favorite animal

Ravens

Favorite weapon

Hand-to-hand

Favorite possession

His baby blanket that he’s kept with him forever

Favorite color

Dark purple/blue

Occupation

Soldier

Politics

  • He believes in karma and justice

  • He does believe in the power of violence, but acknowledges the fact that logic and words are sometimes the best approach- but he was reborn out of violence and it’s in his blood

  • He believes in what’s worth protecting, and believes in himself. An eye for an eye.

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History

Background

He’s an orphan. His village of Dyszui was raided and burned, his mom killed him in half-sure hopes that he had regenerative powers, so they would throw his ‘corpse’ out of the house and not burn him. His parents died, and he ran until meeting Lysia and such.
He raised himself, similarly to Lysia (hence the clashing personalities).
He remembers a day when he and his parents were running in a field, laughing and talking. He remembers the first time he saw Lysia in battle and decided that’s what he wanted to be like. He remembers the first time he saw Yanni cry, and he realized how much she trusted him and just how much he was really worth if she could love him that much.
He kind of hasn’t realized how much his ‘new family’ means to him though, and realizes it after Dorota and Lysia leave and Diego almost gives up on himself.
He brings interesting relationship dynamics with Yanni as his mother-figure. He’s a slightly cliche vengeful character, but has a goal and an arc that he achieves. Also, for the near-death experience he has that triggers the clear memory of him dying when he was a little boy.

Education

Still in military training
Self-taught for languages and all academic things, though Yanni helped him fill up some gaps when they adopted him.

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Overview

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Name fingerprint

Kohmir

Age

19

Gender

Male

Other names

Raven

Role

MC, Son of the Raven

face

Looks

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Facial Hair

Always clean-shaven

Hair Style

A neat crew cut

Hair Color

Pitch black

Height

5’10

Weight

180 pounds

Identifying Marks

A deep, white scar right over his heart, a stab wound
Wears a lot of jewelry and eyeliner (and occasionally borrows Lysia's lipstick), specifically a pair of steel raven earrings

Body Type

Lean, athletic

Skin Tone

Olive

Race

Dyszui

Eye Color

Honey brown

fingerprint

Nature

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Prejudices

Gets easily annoyed at the lofty, mellow type of person.
Actually cautious around any race he doesn’t know well (humans, Night Children, woodland creatures)

Condition(s)

Sexuality- straight demi

Mannerisms

  • He walks very-straight backed, confident and proud

  • His voice has a natural musical and husky sound to it, and you can easily hear the smile or the frown in it

  • Walks with his arms loose and by his side, ready to act

  • He walks at a normal pace, and very quietly because he’s always alert

  • His mouth twitches a lot since he tries to contain his emotions when he’s talking

  • Squints his eyes or blinks a lot, to better focus himself on people

  • Often kind of gazes at people when they’re talking to him with a dreamy kind of expression (his mind is constantly running a mile a minute)

  • He gets very loud when he’s angry, and uses a lot of hand gestures to express annoyance or to chide someone

  • When hurt or sad, he’ll be more forward and sharp and unrelenting, also has less of a filter

  • When he gets excited, it’s hard to tell. He’ll walk faster and sometimes lets out a skip or turn or something

  • Often likes slowing down to breathe in the air and admire the sky, and looking around to appreciate wherever he is

  • When gets uncontrollably emotional he isolates himself and waits it out, either training or meditating to get some of it out

Motivations

  • Yanni, who is the absolute best thing in his life.

  • One part of him wants vengeance. He knows that his parents didn’t deserve to die, and needs to exact the pain Midas caused him back- an eye for an eye.

  • The other part of him wants to silence the soldier inside of him so he can settle down and live out his life peacefully and surrounded only by his friends and (maybe) family

  • He’d be ready to lay down his life for either Yanni, the platonic love of his life, or Lysia, the person he admires most

  • He will protect and defend without fail

Flaws

  • Losing Yanni. He has put EVERYTHING he is into her and losing her would be losing himself. He’s had to find himself and piece himself together once already, and he’s not sure he’d have the strength to do it again.

  • He’s private about his backstory

  • Strong emotion is strange to him and he isn’t open about his feelings, ever

  • Can get cocky and rowdy when he’s riled up

  • Extremely competitive and cutthroat, always pushes himself to his absolute limits and is quite hard on himself

  • He’s ruthless and unmovable. If you’ve done him or someone else wrong, you deserve whatever is decided is coming to you

  • Unapologetic about what isn’t worth it to him. But he does care a LOT when he cares

Talents

A phenomenal fighter, both with weapons or hand to hand.
An excellent memory and fluent in a number of languages.
A walking encyclopaedia, especially when it comes to plants.
Easily intimidating and strangely skilled at picking fights, though he doesn’t if it’s unnecessary.

Hobbies

Training and studying/reading; his hobbies fill his extra time.
Although he fights a lot (with his army), it doesn’t make him happy. He just needs to be ready when he gets the chance to avenge his family.

Personality type

Would make a scene if someone’s done something wrong, or to defend Yanni (or any of his friends for that matter).
He’s a naturally strong, scary guy, but he’s given himself a people-loving, protective, loyal, sweet side. He’s proud of where he is with his life and cherishes his new family (the crew).
Kohmir respects and knows himself. He knows his limits, and is constantly challenging himself. He’s a very stable, intimidating character. He acts rationally (most of the time), loyally and bravely -nothing will make him back down from a fight. He’s definitely a force to be reckoned with.
Intimidated by what he can’t control, but he never backs down. He was stopped from helping once, and it isn’t happening again

groups

Social

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Favorite food

Prefers lighter food, like vegetables or fruits.
Has a soft spot for stew for some reason

Favorite animal

Ravens

Favorite weapon

Hand-to-hand

Favorite possession

His baby blanket that he’s kept with him forever

Favorite color

Dark purple/blue

Occupation

Soldier

Politics

  • He believes in karma and justice

  • He does believe in the power of violence, but acknowledges the fact that logic and words are sometimes the best approach- but he was reborn out of violence and it’s in his blood

  • He believes in what’s worth protecting, and believes in himself. An eye for an eye.

info

History

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Background

He’s an orphan. His village of Dyszui was raided and burned, his mom killed him in half-sure hopes that he had regenerative powers, so they would throw his ‘corpse’ out of the house and not burn him. His parents died, and he ran until meeting Lysia and such.
He raised himself, similarly to Lysia (hence the clashing personalities).
He remembers a day when he and his parents were running in a field, laughing and talking. He remembers the first time he saw Lysia in battle and decided that’s what he wanted to be like. He remembers the first time he saw Yanni cry, and he realized how much she trusted him and just how much he was really worth if she could love him that much.
He kind of hasn’t realized how much his ‘new family’ means to him though, and realizes it after Dorota and Lysia leave and Diego almost gives up on himself.
He brings interesting relationship dynamics with Yanni as his mother-figure. He’s a slightly cliche vengeful character, but has a goal and an arc that he achieves. Also, for the near-death experience he has that triggers the clear memory of him dying when he was a little boy.

Education

Still in military training
Self-taught for languages and all academic things, though Yanni helped him fill up some gaps when they adopted him.

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