I haven't really critiqued anyone's character before, so I can't say I'll be the best at it, but I want to try. Send me your characters and I'll do what I can!
I can critique characters!
Ooh fun! Can I link you one of mine? :) This is Casey, here's part of an All-Asian-American boy band, I'd like to get several opinions on him.
- good detail on the hair, that's a nice way to describe it
- !!!! please! don't let anyone whitewash him!!!
- I love me a boy with great thighs oh yes
- your nature page is far better than I can do, being self-centered, childish, and attention seeking are all traits that fit fairly well together, I like it
- does he wear makeup all the time??
- his motivation, while being cliche, is also realistic. Many people strive to be loved by someone and want someone who cares for them.
- good character, but backstory!! I know you might not have it all fleshed out, but the backstory is very important and is key to your characters. Just something to think about. Things like: what is his family like? Why did he decide to join a band? Did he have a different plan before or was he always wanting to be in a band? Did he take voice lessons? Does he play any instruments?
I really like him, he sounds awesome and like someone I would want to know. Totally sounds like someone I would stan, tbh. Good work on him!
Can you do one of my characters?
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Aaahhh thank you you're too nice to both him and me <3 Those are all good things to think about, will definitely work on his backstory. Thanks so much! :)
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Could you do mine?
Her maybe?
Thanks!
@Rory sorry I’m so late!
- first of all, love love LOVE the picture like I think I already have a good idea of what this character is like
- okay so she’s pretty tan, but….uh… by the way… just a … fair warning… don’t describe her skin tone like that when you write,,, it will not end well my guy my pal try to name a shade of color instead of saying “pretty tan, she’s not a vampire but she’s not black” pls
- I will say, the surprise shapeshifting talent threw me for a loop but it matches her character very well; can she make herself look however she wants? If someone makes a comment about her appearance is she able to change it immediately? Interesting things to think about
- her “personality type” category is killer, I love it. I do get a Heathers vibe from her, very much so
- she’s conservative JUST to make people mad? Or does she actually have valid opinions that don’t orbit around antagonizing people
- her enemies are her friends, very interesting
- the background is very good, I like how you mention that she still has a lot of that icy Queen Bee personality because that’s pretty realistic; she’s acted that way for so long there’s no way it can all just disappear that easily
Nice work! I hope this helped!
- Yeah her character definitely reminded me of Heather Chandler ahaha
- Haha okay I've changed it to "slightly sunkissed"
- Yeah, she doesn't really have any strong political views but she literally just likes when people get offended.
Thanks very much! :)
This is one of my characters I have had some problems with, I have writer's block and don't know where to go with them. Thank you!
Hi! Would you mind checking out one of my babies? I'm just trying to see if I'm missing anything..
could you look at this character for me?
Hi! Would you mind looking over my characters?
Could you critique my character Rie? Here's the link; Rie Katayama