Would you like to join me in reading along as I write, and giving suggestions?

@Echo_6 16 comments June 25, 2019

@Echo_6 June 25, 2019

This is the rough draft I'm working on right at the moment if you want to join me on this endeavor.

@StarkSpangledMayflower_Mad_Elder June 25, 2019

This is an awesome story!

@Echo_6 June 25, 2019

Thank you, I'm open to critique at any time as well as suggestions if you think it might make the story flow better.

@StarkSpangledMayflower_Mad_Elder June 25, 2019

There are a few spelling errors but I'll give you a better critique in the morning because its 1 am here and my brain has stopped working lol

@Echo_6 June 25, 2019

Yeah, I should go to bed as well. It's not one here but it is midnight.

@StarkSpangledMayflower_Mad_Elder June 25, 2019

Lol

@Echo_6 June 25, 2019

This could take a long time for me to finish but I hope that when I'm done with this rough draft I'll be able to write the final draft and then get it published.

@StarkSpangledMayflower_Mad_Elder June 25, 2019

I'd be excited to read this if it got published

@Echo_6 June 25, 2019

That gives me much more confidence in getting it published. I just gotta make sure to write it in a way that helps people like some characters, love some characters, dislike some characters, hate some characters and loathe a few of the characters.

@Rach July 03, 2019

i started editing but ill do the rest later. hope you find it helpful!

@Echo_6 July 03, 2019

Thank you!

@Echo_6 July 18, 2019

@"The Grammar Queen" welcome to the place where I write.

Deleted user July 18, 2019

Oh, hey!

Deleted user July 18, 2019

I've started giving some suggestions~~

Deleted user July 18, 2019

I have to go for now, but I will try to keep editing soon! Love it so far!

@Echo_6 July 18, 2019

Thank you!