Isaac

sections i've added to my sheet: -clothing -health (overall, physical, mental, emotional, social, spiritual would probably be applicable for you) -skills/talents -weaknesses (seeing as your cha...

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@CinnamonRoll thanks for the help! and yes, i do like the idea! i could see the big bad government having people in the inner circle that have expertise in a certain field (military, medicine, tech...

@CinnamonRoll thank you for the critique (especially the politics bit)! could you look at her finished backstory? there isn't anything ~super~ important, but it covers where she got some of her qua...

could you critique my villain? https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/957671

@CinnamonRoll i thought zakiya felt a little stiff too and adding more human traits/how she behaves has helped. i worked out all the other issues, and she feels like a stronger character now. thank...

Could you take a look at Zakiya? https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/909600

@CinnamonRoll thanks for critiquing amari and ikaika! it helped me out a lot (especially with amari). i've updated them with the notes you gave me, and they're both much stronger characters now!

could you critique my protagonist? https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/904253 i've filled out almost every field, but i still feel like she's missing something if it's not too much, could y...

I'm white and writing a lot of characters of color. This blog has been incredibly helpful to me, and it's helped me make sure I'm not being unintentionally racist in my story. Also, if you're stati...