Bones

Hiya again! Can you critique my main character ,please?I really don't want her to seem edgy. https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/467703

@writelikeyourerunningoutoftime Thanks a lot for the critique again!I must admit,I didn't thought too much about those characters.I think that's why I didn't wrote a lot more about them.Plus,I made...

@blu Glad I helped.

@blu I think your character is on private (just letting you know.I don't want you to do the same mistake as me).

@writelikeyourerunningoutoftime No problem! Also,thanks again!I'll do that rn. ^ ^

@writelikeyourerunningoutoftime Thanks a lot!I actually added more to this character after the first critique but I think I got too far ; Oswald will be one of the main characters so he'll be ...

Hello! It's-a me again :^ I just finished writing about those two characters (Timmy and Jack).Their stories are related.Can you take a look over them,please?Idk why but Jack seem too edgy for me ...

Hello!Can you take a look over some of my characters,please?I have this character,Oswald,that may need some critiques.And I just finished writing about those two characters (Timmy and Jack).Their s...

@Snowmirror Sorry for the late answer!Just saw the notification! ;; Also,thanks a lot!This helped me a lot! -About stopping Mask,this isn't really related to his father.Well,this is his objecti...

@Snowmirror Oh,yeah.Sorry about that (forgot that I put it on private after the last comment here to edit it) https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/467712