Aidan

Start in the midst of a battle, show (don't tell) the scene, (setting, atmosphere, tension,, etc.), hover in on a specific character, what they're doing, how they're doing it. The battle itself doe...

Before I get started, here's my magic system. Some beings may have more mana than others, but mana is the energy of a character using magic, and any magic character can only use their element, most...