Elowyz Jensen

Once you send in a character, please tell me what kind of review you want; either a critique, general review, a positive "what I liked", etc.

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If you could review this character I'd really appreciate it. https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/918851

@JumboJambo2020 Hi! Thank you for replying. I tagged one of the characters I have open for critique tagged above. Here it is again. Feel free to look through other characters tagged onto him. h...

@JumboJambo2020 So I went over Jiri and I really liked what I am seeing. After exploring some of the other characters tagged with him, I was able to understand some of the story and world you've ...

@PaperCraneEnthusiast Due to the fact I am unaware of your story and the whole picture, I can only place Queen Veda is the context I can gather from the character profile. In your character profi...

Hello there. Does anyone have a more in depth knowledge of the effects of castration on a male body when the castration is done at a young age? I have done enough research to understand the basic e...

So I began by reading the "Backstory" portion of the character bio. I am interested in the setting of the story as well as the premise you have set up, but so far the best part of the character the...

I will totally go over Dakota. I took a quick peek and the amount of writing you have certainly shows your work and dedication to your story. If you would also take a look at my character while I a...

If you could review this character, I would appreciate it. Some of the terminology might be hard to understand without context, so hopefully I will be able to tag what is needed. https://www.note...